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Poetry Friday: a thank-you note to the universe by noor unnahar

March 15th, 2019 (06:00 am)
creative

Current Mood: creative
Current Song: Old Habits Die Hard by Allie X

last night i whispered
a thank-you note to the universe
for it made oceans and stars
equally beautiful and accessible
for all of us; i breathe the same air
as the people i love and the people i lost
the particles of their existence are still
surrounding me and this is how loneliness
doesn’t know how to find me alone

- a thank-you note to the universe by noor unnahar

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Posted by: Linda Baie (Linda Baie)
Posted at: March 15th, 2019 02:51 pm (UTC)

It's a comforting poem for us to sometimes need that comfort. Thanks!

Posted by: Little Willow (slayground)
Posted at: March 15th, 2019 03:35 pm (UTC)
fly

Comfort is key.

Posted by: Heidi Mordhorst (Heidi Mordhorst)
Posted at: March 15th, 2019 09:40 pm (UTC)

the particles of their existence are still
surrounding me

That's how I feel all the time about everyone in the world. Thanks for this expression of that.

Posted by: Little Willow (slayground)
Posted at: March 15th, 2019 09:45 pm (UTC)

Isn't it pretty?

Posted by: mlyearofreading (mlyearofreading)
Posted at: March 16th, 2019 11:41 am (UTC)

" i breathe the same air
as the people i love and the people i lost
the particles of their existence are still
surrounding me "

What a comfort!

Posted by: Little Willow (slayground)
Posted at: March 16th, 2019 03:26 pm (UTC)
books

It's such a beautiful thought.

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